A Showcase of how Phyllis Controlled Neff like a Marionette_Shannon Swingley
Shannon Swingley
Honors Scholar Noir, Film and Novel
Professor Sinowitz
6 October 2017
“‘That’s
the way you operate isn’t it, baby?’”: A Showcase of how Phyllis Controlled
Neff like a Marionette
Double Indemnity is a complicated tale
that showcases a botched attempt at the perfect crime. Throughout the story,
the power dynamics between the hardboiled insurance salesman, Walter Neff, and
his femme fatale, Phyllis Dietrichson, are complicated, apparently debatable, and
crucial for the end of the film. The debate lies in who has the power in the
relationship between Neff and Phyllis. Some of my classmates have argued that
because the insurance salesman has all of the functional knowledge about how to
pull of the heist, he is the one in control of the situation. However, I
believe that the very first meeting between the two characters showcases that
Phyllis is in fact wielding all the power in the relationship.
The scene opens
with Neff walking through the door and towering over the oddly cynical and
possibly alcoholic housemaid. After being rebuffed he forces his way into the
parlor and is told Mr. Dietrichson is not in, Phyllis soon appears at the top
of the stairs. She is only wearing a towel and is lit beautifully. The camera
bounces back and forth between the two during a short conversation. Phyllis
retreats to get dressed, and Neff explores the sitting room while his narration
reveals that he is still thinking about his want for the beautiful woman. When
she returns, they briefly discuss insurance though Neff spends a decent amount
of that time ogling her anklet and flirting with her. She asks about an
accident policy on her husband without Mr. Deitrichson’s knowledge and Neff’s
first response is to shut her down. The two have a quick exchange where Phyllis
plays an officer of the law and it results in Neff retreating towards the door
into the barred shadow of the venetian blinds. Throughout this scene there are many
indications of the relationship and story to come, the camera angles, lighting,
and framing all play a role in exemplifying the dynamics in Double Indemnity.
In film the angle at which the audience is
made to view a character gives great insight into how we are supposed to feel
about them. At the outset of the scene Neff is made to appear imposing, brutish,
and in control of the situation when he bullies the housemaid. The camera is
put at eye-level with Walter, but the massive height difference between the two
makes has us looking down towards the woman while Neff towers over her. This
gives Neff the position of power at the beginning of the scene. However, as
soon as Phyllis appears, there is a cut to a wide-angle lens that looks up over
Walter’s shoulder towards the femme fatale, giving her the position of power in
the scene. In the latter portion of the scene when they discuss the insurance,
Neff has his back to the camera and is sat upright on the couch while Phyllis
faces out towards the audience in a relaxed position. During on screen conversations,
the over the shoulder shot points us towards the most important person in that
moment, the one who is speaking. However, in this scene we are focused towards
Phyllis the entire time, giving us a sense of her importance being greater than
Neff’s. Further, as the scene progresses she stands up and Neff remains seated,
the camera pans to follow Phyllis through the room, cutting Neff out entirely.
This reinforces the idea that she is the most important and powerful character,
along with the fact that he is providing her options that she will make decisions
about in the future. In the latter portion of the scene, camera angles shift
during their back and forth, making lighting the more telling feature.
Lighting is one of
the more subtle ways that the audience is manipulated to think differently
about the situation in film. Backlighting and spotlighting are often ethereal
and point the audience in the direction that their attention should go. Angles
of lighting are important in the same way that camera angles are. Lighting at
harsh angles from below, above, or to the sides casts harsh shadows on a
characters face making them look less attractive and more sinister. But the
correct lighting will soften an individual’s features to make them appear eye
catching and important. Throughout the majority of the scene Phyllis is backlit
or front lit to make her stand out while Neff remains, in large part, shadowed.
During their conversation a the end of the scene, the backlighting that draws
our eyes towards Phyllis casts harsh shadows under Neff’s jaw that make him
look less appealing. Further, at the very end of the scene, the classic noir
tactic of using venetian blinds to create interesting shadows portrays Neff
walking into a barred pattern. This is clear foreshadowing for the end of the
film where Walter confesses his crimes and is put to death.
This ending shows
that Phyllis truly is the embodiment of the noir femme fatale, they are said to
be a danger to both themselves and others and are just as likely to love a man as
kill him. She is never invested in Neff outside of her interest in power and
money, she merely uses her sexuality to manipulate. She even goes so far as to
admit this much, “No. I never loved you, Walter. Not you or anybody else. I’m
rotten to the heart. I used you just as you said. That’s all you ever meant to
me—until a minute ago. I didn’t think anything like that could ever happen to
me” (D-20, Double Indemnity). She
admits to manipulating him, and continues to manipulate him in the same breath
knowing that he is about to kill her. Some might say that in killing Phyllis at
the end of the film Walter takes control. However, he also gives up his own
life when he confesses, showing that even in death Phyllis has an inexorable
pull on the man in her search for power. This pull was primarily generated
through sex, and we can see that through the staging of their meeting scene.
Phyllis first emerges
dressed in only a towel at the top of the staircase; she is backlit almost
angelically, but other factors suggest to us that she will be a primarily
sexual object in the eyes of Neff. Phyllis is wearing only a towel, which at this
time was about as close to nudity as you can get despite the fact that it
covers just about as much as a dress. Later sex scenes harken back to the white
towel with white sheets that would cover her nudity. Additionally, the framing
when she appears behind the staircase banister shows an obvious and
conveniently placed yonic symbol over her body that is clearly denotes her
sexuality being front and center in Walter’s eyes. Lastly, throughout the
entire scene we are put into Neff’s male gaze as he admires her feet and
anklet, particularly when Phyllis descends the staircase and we can only see
her feet, this continues when she is sat in the large armchair with her legs
and feet lit brightly and placed in the center of the screen. By forcing
viewers into Neff’s male gaze it is obvious that he objectifies her sexually.
Later Walter remarks, “she was perfect. No nerves, not a tear, not even a blink
of the eye,” calling her perfect in this description further shows that he is
enamored with the objectified version of herself that Phyllis sold to him.
Throughout the
entire construction of this scene we see that Phyllis is placed in a position
of power over Neff, which foreshadows the dynamics in the rest of the film. The
script even goes so far as to have her explain that she only used Neff to get
what she wanted, money and power. Her seduction of Neff as a power play began
immediately, and these connections between the two main characters in the film
were shown to the audience directly through camera angle, lighting, and
framing. These subtleties negate Neff’s power and help explain his ultimate
demise at the hands of Phyllis’s actions and Keyes’ justice.
You did a great job of implementing the "they say, I say" technique that we have been discussing in class within the first paragraph. Placing it there makes the reader aware of what you will be discussing right off the bat while simultaneously giving your paper a movie. Another thing you did a good job at was explaining how the film techniques used supported your claim in Phyllis being depicted as the more powerful of the two. I also liked how when you used quotes from the scene you thoroughly explained them and their relevance to supporting your claim as opposed to just letting them sit in your paper. One thing that I wish you would have done differently was instead of talking about angle and lighting in separate paragraphs you would have incorporated it more into your explanation of the scene. I think close reading the scene as it progresses, incorporating information about the importance of things such as angles and lighting within the explanation, helps to provide more of a flow, but overall I think you did a really good job explaining how the film techniques used supported your claim, as well as discussing the significance of the scene to the movie.
ReplyDeleteHi Shannon!
ReplyDeleteThis was a really great essay! You showed an amazing awareness of all the different aspects that make up a film, from lightning, to angles, to framing! You discussed so many things that I never thought of and couldn't believe I'd missed! I especially loved this insight:
"Further, at the very end of the scene, the classic noir tactic of using venetian blinds to create interesting shadows portrays Neff walking into a barred pattern. This is clear foreshadowing for the end of the film where Walter confesses his crimes and is put to death."
I never would have thought of that, and it was such a neat detail to pick up on! You also did a great job with including a "they say" and a motive for your piece.
The one comment I have is that the arrangement of your ideas is a bit scrambled. It definitely threw me off when you included the paragraph about the ending scene before jumping right back into your discussion of Phyllis in the towel in their meeting scene. I think that making sure the essay is in chronological order would help make your points even clearer! Also, your first and second paragraphs both seem to include thesis, and I was wondering if you could combine them somehow! Maybe put some stuff about the filming techniques in the first paragraph? This is just a little thing that might be a nice addition for the reader!
Again, great job! I really loved this piece. You should check out Shafrarisi's essay sometime too, because she pretty much has the opposite opinion as you do: it was crazy reading both of your pieces one after the other!
Samantha Shapard